Well, here we are. The third of the GJO Trilogy is personally the most conflicting for me. There are some plotholes that still need to be solved by the end of it, and a ton of questions remain unanswered. But that's okay, because this is just a rough cut of the story. I hope to fix these issues by the time I actually get this far in writing, if I get this far.
Star Wars: Gray Jedi Order Book Three: The Maverick's Fate. SPOILERS FOR MY STORY FOLLOW!!
In the fateful conclusion to the Gray Jedi Trilogy, Eddlyss comes to terms with what it means to be a Force-user who walks the line between light and dark, and prepares to face his father once more.
Now six months after the events of the last book, the galaxy has been plunged once more into chaos and corruption. The New Jedi Order is nothing more than a memory, and the destruction of the New Republic is merely a disturbing dream. The Resistance has been either quelled down or dispelled entirely, and Kylo Ren is the new Darth Vader, his training in the dark side complete. Moreso, a dark force has appeared to rival the First Order, with Eddlyss’ father, Darth Arkus, at the helm, and his Master in the shadows. The Gray Jedi have retreated into hiding, and the First Order controls everything.
The story begins in a small trading town in Deskar, a desert planet riddled with poverty. A boy is being chased down by a Stormtrooper. The boy is cornered by two troopers and they begin to beat him, but a man in a dark gray cloak leaps from the roof and cuts down the troopers with a green lightsaber. The man helps up the boy, who says that Stormtroopers were destroying the markets and getting ready to ambush a group of smugglers bringing precious goods to the village. The man tells the boy to find his family and hide, and he travels to the town’s market, where troopers are destroying the markets and preparing an anti-air turbolaser turret, as the boy had predicted. He entered their line of sight immediately, and drew and ignited green and blue lightsabers, tearing the troopers apart without batting an eye and destroying the half-completed turbolaser with a single swing of his saber. The people of the village are shocked and amazed at the sight of a Jedi before them, but he merely tells them that it is safe and begins to help repair the damages inflicted by the stormtroopers.
As the villagers pitch in around him (slowly, as they are still in awe) the man senses the approach of the smuggler’s ship, which lands safely thanks to his ‘preparation’. The ship’s crew begins unloading the precious goods, and the man finds the ship’s captain. He says that he requires a lift off the planet as his own ship was destroyed, saying that his destination is a rock called Altrich-3 and that he can pay handsomely. The captain, however, realizing that this man had saved the villagers as well as his own skin from the First Order, rejects the money and says he’ll do it for free. The man thanks the captain and climbs aboard. The man enters a vacant sleeping quarters and pulls off his hood, revealing himself to be Eddlyss. The young man pulls out a comm and tries once more to contact the Gray Jedi as he’d been trying for months, but gets only static. Eddlyss stows away the comm and sighs as the freighter takes off and blasts into the sky.
Meanwhile, Darth Arkus reports to his Master, saying that the Ark’s Hand of stormtroopers (similar to 501st) had successfully taken control of the Malgus Asteroid Belt. His Master asks if the Gray Jedi Order had been found, but he is met with a no. Arkus’ Master makes to lash out at his apprentice, but he suddenly is wracked with surprising pain and staggers backwards. When he is righted, Arkus asks what happened, to which his Master replies that he had felt a powerful surge of Force energy, one he had only heard of in legends and felt through holocrons, the power of a long dead Force-user. Arkus suggests that perhaps it was caused by Arceane’s son, and continues that although he was likely dead, he could be alive. However, his Master scoffs at this, saying that the boy’s energy was not anything like that of the man that he feared. Nevertheless, he sends Darth Arkus to hunt down the boy once more, telling him that he must be ended, or Arkus will die.
Back with Eddlyss, the ship has dropped the ex-Jedi off on Altrich-3, a small planet of rocky formations. The ex-Jedi makes his way into a cavern far from where the smugglers dropped him off, a cavern that is actually the entrance to a hidden Jedi Temple. Eddlyss cautiously picks his way down into the Temple, and makes good headway through the rubble until a single man points a blaster pistol at him, ordering him to stop. The ex-Jedi turns to see a Mandalorian, helmetless and with a face scarred by war. The Mandalorian questions the young ex-Jedi, seeing if he was sent to kill him. Eddlyss replies that he has no intentions of fighting the warrior, and it might even benefit the both of them to team up considering they were both members of extinct species. The Mandalorian couldn’t argue with this point, holstering his blaster and introducing himself as Secross.
The ex-Jedi and the Mandalorian travel through deeper into the Temple, with Secross explaining his past and Eddlyss explaining his reason for arriving on the planet: a Holocron said to contain the secrets of long dead Jedi and Sith Masters. The two loners come to a circular area, with an elevated path leading to an inner chamber. Secross notices various weapons scattered around the clearing, and the shadows are filled with skeletons. Eddlyss senses long dead Force-users, inferring that there was a battle that no one won. Secross questions what did win when Eddlyss ignites a lightsaber and throws it at an ancient combat droid in the shadows, calling it back to him. About a dozen more heavily armed and armored combat droids appeared, which the ex-Jedi and Mandalorian retreat from with a Force jump and jetpack into the chamber. A massive wall blocks the chamber, which Eddlyss opens with the Force. In the middle of the room is the Holocron, glowing blue. Eddlyss takes the Holocron and the two loners return outside, where the combat droids are forming up. Secross draws his blaster, but Eddlyss says that Tibanna gas would be ineffective against the droids, and he hands the Mandalorian Garsis’ old lightsaber. The two loners leap into the fray cutting through the droid plating, though barely escaping with their lives to the surface.
With the Holocron in their possession, Secross leads the way to his ship and the duo takes off to a refueling station. Eddlyss immediately tries to activate the Holocron, and though he exerts great Force strength, he is unable to open it. As he struggles, a voice behind him says that he won’t be able to open it. Eddlyss turns to see his Master, Revan, in the form of a Force ghost. Revan says that the Holocron is a case sensitive device and must be opened by a Jedi or Sith. Eddlyss questions where he can find such a being, since the Jedi were all but extinct and no Sith Lord would help him. But Revan avoids his question, saying only that his future was shrouded in more pain and darkness than he had ever experienced, and that he must have the strength to survive. With that, Revan vanishes as Secross appears, saying that their ship was about to exit hyperspace.
The duo lands and exits their ship to get it refueled, and almost immediately Eddlyss senses a massive disturbance in the Force. Before he can warn his new Mandalorian comrade, however, a blaster bolt goes through Secross’ head, instantly killing him. Eddlyss ignites his sabers and whirls to see the 501st look-alikes swarming out of a nearby hangar and surrounding the ex-Jedi, who deactivates his sabers and puts them away, signifying his surrender. Out steps Darth Arkus, who steps up to his son and faces him. Rather than cowering as he might have before, Eddlyss merely sneers at his father’s eyes turned yellow by Sith ways. The ex-Jedi shakes his head asking what his father has become, to which his father replies with ‘more than you could be’. He extends his hand for Eddlyss’ lightsabers, but Eddlyss instead gives him the Holocron. Arkus looks confused until the ex-Jedi says that all the information Arkus could want to defeat his Master (as is the way of the Sith) and take his place is stored in the Holocron. Arkus asks why he won’t just use it, and Eddlyss replies that only a Jedi or Sith can open it, and he is neither. The Sith Lord is shocked to hear the phrase (nearly identical to the words of Revan). Arkus pockets the Holocron and calls for the Arc’s Hand to return to the ship, saying Eddlyss will come with as a prisoner.
As the troops head back, one breaks rank and throws off his helmet when he sees Secross’ dead body, running to it and kneeling next to it. Arkus yells for the trooper (known as GS-2264) to return, but the trooper rejects the order, saying that he wants to mourn the brother that he’d just killed. Instead of yelling further orders, Arkus merely gestures for a handful of troopers to make a firing squad and kill the trooper. However, as the half circle of troopers fires, Eddlyss charges in with his lightsaber and deflects the bolts into the air. Arkus merely shrugs and continues onto the ship as the would be firing squad slowly backs into formation. Eddlyss turns to the trooper GS-2264, who watched in shock as his own men fired on him, and then a lightside Force user saved him. Eddlyss recommends the name Garrus as he clips his saber and goes willingly into the transport. Inside, his wrists are bound as he stands behind Arkus, whom he proceeds to belittle with troubling conversation until Eddlyss is sent to a holding cell. Arkus immediately goes to his quarters and activates the Holocron.
The ship travels to a planet covered in swirling red clouds and mountains. Eddlyss is retrieved and stands with Arkus at the main hatchway. The ex-Jedi is uncertain for the first time, and asks their location, which Arkus replies Moraband, the ancient homeworld of the Sith. The ship lands on a plain next to a massive red mountain, and the troops file out with Arkus and Eddlyss (shackled) in front. The group of troopers goes to a barrack, however GS-2264 is to be brought with to the Sith Master. The trio takes an elevator to the top floor of the mountain fortress, a large chamber tinted red from the floor vents.
On a massive throne sits the Sith Master, an old, dangerous looking man with yellowed hair and glowing green eyes. Eddlyss is thrust before the Sith, and his leg is kicked out beneath him to bring him to his knees. However, he gets up and glares defiantly at the Sith Lord, who smirks and has him step aside. Finally he comes to the trooper, who has a false look of meekness. The Sith Master after learning that he disobeyed an order, has him step back and then strikes at him with Force Lightning, repeatedly stopping and restarting. However, the trooper refuses to plead for mercy. The Sith Lord intensifies his attack, but his hands begin to smoke and he stops at the smell of burning flesh (Eddlyss was using his mental Force abilities to project a Force field over the trooper and rebounding the energy back into the Sith Lord; not enough to deflect all the pain, but enough to make the Sith feel the energy on his end). However, the trooper doesn’t know what happened, and thus the Sith Lord has Arkus step forward to cut down the trooper. However, Eddlyss breaks from his bonds and deflects his father’s strike with his own lightsaber at the last second. He asks if his father has any light left in him, which his father replies that he didn’t need the light anymore.
With that, Eddlyss draws his other saber and fights Arkus. Throughout the entire duel it is clear that Eddlyss has the edge, as he belittles his father for falling to the dark side so willingly. Arkus begins to fight sloppily as his anger begins to blind him, and Eddlyss eventually overpowers his father with the use of Force Lightning and cuts off his dominant hand, sending his lightsaber flying. However, he leaves his father alive rather than killing him, and turns to the Sith Lord, whose face is livid with fear and shock (the words Eddlyss had been saying were almost exactly like those spoken by Revan, the ancient Force-user whom the Sith Lord fears). The Sith Lord ignites his wrist blades and draws a saber shoto and leaps at Eddlyss in fury and rash terror, but Eddlyss easily fends off the old warrior, disarming him almost immediately and uses the Force to send his foe into a wall.
Eddlyss steps up to his foe, his sabers poised to kill, giving the Sith no chance for repentance. However, a blaster bolt goes through the ex-Jedi’s leg, taking him down. Arkus used the Force to level Garrus’ blaster at Eddlyss, but couldn’t aim for his torso. However, the Sith merely attacks with Force Lightning, which Eddlyss barely deflects with his sabers (goes for long time, begins to pound into him and scar the sides of his face and his knuckles).
Meanwhile, Garrus is recovering, and sees one of Eddlyss’ lightsabers (Garsis) knocked free during the duel. Arkus notices the trooper, and uses the Force to regain his lightsaber and turns to kill Garrus. However, Garrus uses his wrist grapple to grab the lightsaber and throw it to Eddlyss, who catches it in his teeth to ignite it and slash upward across the Sith Lord, who collapses. Eddlyss catches himself on his damaged legs and looks up just in time to see his father about to strike Garrus down. With his remaining strength, he throws his lightsaber at his father, cutting his head off. Eddlyss collapses as Garrus tries to help him...and he opens his eyes in a sea of white. His wounds have disappeared, and there are no lightsabers with him. He gets up and sees the ghostly forms of Revan, Qui-Gon Jinn and two other Force-users who identify as Obi-Wan Kenobi and Master Yoda. Revan explains that Eddlyss is not dead, though he was close to it. Darth Arkus was dead, as he rejected the balance of the Force. Yoda says that he has become powerful with the Force, enough to rival himself as well as Revan. Obi-Wan says that his destiny is now complete, to defeat the rising Sith menace. Eddlyss asks if Luke was there, which Obi-Wan replies that he is still alive, but in hiding. Eddlyss then asks about Saedi, his dead love, and Revan steps aside to reveal the young ex-Jedi. The two embrace, and Eddlyss asks what happens next. Qui-Gon says that with the young man’s mastery of the Force, he could allow himself to die and become with the Force like these were. But Eddlyss remembers the Sith Lord, and asks if he still lives, which Revan replies that yes, he survived purely on the power of the dark side and intended to wage war on the First Order, kill Snoke and rule the galaxy with or without an apprentice. Eddlyss believes he must go back, and despite Revan’s warning that it his not his destiny to defeat Darth Khelzer, he approves of Eddlyss’ return. Obi-Wan says he will appear to Luke and inform him of the situation. Revan says that they through the Force will be with him, and thus Eddlyss returns to the living world, and is immediately in residual pain from the Lightning and his leg healing. Garrus realizes he’s alive and begins to laugh, but Eddlyss immediately looks to where the Sith had laid, and notices that he is gone. He says that they need a ship, and Garrus replies that that can be arranged.
Meanwhile, the Sith Lord is hastily patched up with new armor and partially dunked in bacta to start his wounds healing, and the troops begin deployment to the First Order base. Kylo Ren, now a powerful darkside Force-user, was ordering his troops to prepare for an assault on a Resistance concentration in Hutt Space when a dozen troop transports emblazoned with the old Imperial insignia landed. The Sith Lord steps out, and Kylo goes to meet him. The Sith Lord introduces himself as Darth Khelzer, and states that the First Order was now under the control of the new Sith Empire. Kylo Ren merely scoffs and engages the Sith, who waves his hand before delving into the fight, calling for his Arc Troopers to engage the First Order Stormtroopers. The battle raged on for many moments until the sudden arrival of X-Wing fighters soaring through the sky (the Resistance), blasting away at the First Order and the Arc’s Hand alike. At the controls of the lead X-Wing was Luke Skywalker himself, who took to dogfighting as he commanded his squad. Suddenly another ship appeared, one clad in illegal armors, weapons and bolstered by powerful shields and boosters. From this craft leapt Eddlyss into the battle, facing the two darksiders who stopped their fight to see a new foe. Next to Eddlyss fell Skywalker. The Jedi and ex-Jedi ignited their lightsabers and engaged their foes, with Eddlyss battling the now calm and far more dangerous Darth Khelzer and Luke taking on his old apprentice Kylo Ren.
As the battle rages, the two light-inclined Force users are equally matched with their darkside nemeses, but they are tiring. The battle continues, and though the fight is even, Eddlyss begins to tire and lose focus. The turning point comes at a bladelock with Khelzer. Eddlyss is attempting to regain his focus when Skywalker, exhausted from his duel with Kylo Ren, is finally struck down by the fallen prodigy. Eddlyss abandons the fight and stays with his old master in his dying moments, and in his fury he takes on both darkside users at once. However, he is quickly defeated and is simultaneously struck by Khelzer’s Force Lightning and choked by Kylo Ren’s Force grip. However, before he succumbs to death, Khelzer and Kylo scream in shock and drop their victim. Eddlyss turns to see two beings, armed with lightsabers. They approach, and one kneels to check on Skywalker. Realizing he is dead, the shorter one stands and follows his companion. As they glance down at the ex-Jedi’s crippled form, memories flash through Eddlyss. He realizes that these are Anakin Skywalker and Revan at their primes. Anakin attacks Kylo Ren, and Revan rushes Khelzer. It is obvious that the Sith Lord and the Knight of Ren are far outmatched. However, Eddlyss passes out from pain before the fight can be completed (switch to 3rd person narrative for the rest of fight? Write out?) He wakes up to Revan ensuring his safety, informing him that the battle is over, and Snoke had been captured by the Gray Jedi Order. He stands and goes to meet his old best friend, Oryonn. Epilogue speech. (Add return to Bülgerra? Reunion with Nagini?)
Criticism and general thoughts are appreciated!